How to find your authentic voice
From the editor, Yvette Nielsen
After 25 years, I returned to university last week as a nervous new
student ready to explore a lifelong passion - art.
The class title, Finding Your Visual Voice, appealed. Despite spending
most of my career extolling the benefits of honest writing, I've forgotten
how to express myself honestly through other media.
Art is a whole other language for communicating. As with writing,
technical skills are only half the story. The real challenge is hearing
your own voice over the loud stories in your head borne of fear,
inhibition, self-consciousness, habit, perfectionism, laziness or
Just speaking plainly and openly is challenging enough let alone writing
authentically, particularly if you've constricted your style to suit the
culture around you.
Academic, corporate and government writers must take extra care to protect
their personal voices from being steadily strangled by gobbledygook,
and political correctness.
I've landed in hot water more than once for speaking out, both verbally
and in text. (Long-term readers will remember the ramifications of sharing
my views on Mr Murdoch
(http://www.brizcomm.com.au/extras/newsletters.asp?id=92) and September 11
(http://www.brizcomm.com.au/extras/newsletters.asp?id=128) I suspect the
trick to creating honest art, as with honest writing, is to just be
yourself and pretend nobody will ever see your work.
Working quickly often helps jammed-up writers as does writing about a
passion. If you don't have conviction about your subject matter, forget it
- you can't fake "authentic" voice.
PS don't forget to read the new examples of atrocious writing on my "Cut
The Crap (http://www.livejournal.com/users/crapblog/) " web log - and
please do send me any gems you find (good or bad)
PPS check out my bizarre new e-booklet, Odd Bods
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Web content tip
It's difficult enough to find yourself let alone be found by others among
the billions of web sites and blogs out there.
While drumming up links for a client, I decided to revisit some of the
search engines and human-edited web directories popular in the web's
Not surprisingly, most have been gobbled up by cyber-sea big fish Google
and Yahoo. In fact, if you can rank well with the majors, you're likely to
rank well with the rest.
Don't bother spending hours submitting to the hundreds of obscure search
sites and "free for all" promotion services. Just do a solid job with the
big five -
* Open Directory
Other than that, try to create great, accessible content (including ALT
text and page titles and descriptions) and the search engines and
directory editors will follow.
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Thanks to those of you who shared your smoking stories in response to the
last newsletter (http://www.brizcomm.com.au/extras/newsletters.asp?id=168)
"Interesting newsletter. I quit smoking five years ago. (It only took me
15 years to do it.) I have since then had acute writer's block. When I
can write, my work's still good, maybe better -- although I don't think
quitting smoking had anything to do with that. But it's harder, a lot
harder (I hope this sentence makes it past the spam detectors) without a
cigarette between my lips and another one or two burning in the ashtray."
- Ron from West Hollywood, US
"As a lad struggling to think of a plan to quit passive smoking, I thank
you for your efforts and wish you all the best with the transition and
good health to come! :)"
- Ben B.
"Thanks for the bulletin - good luck with the (non) smoking!"
- Chris M, London
"I gave up many years ago – ‘cold turkey’. The only way to do it is to
carry a handful of minties in your pocket, and when u feel the urge, pop a
mintie. It will relieve the craving and take your mind off the smoke as
your mouth is engaged in another activity."
- Pete R, Brisbane
"This latest newsletter is absolutely great!! I had absolutely no idea of
how much Writers could be paid, so you have spurred me on with the writing
I have been playing around with!!! Keep up everything, and don't worry
about the smokes, because if you feel like one, just do it, after all why
- John T
"Nice to see you're still out there doing your stuff."
- Julie, Brisbane
"It is very good to see that you have the strength to at least have a go
at quitting those cancer sticks. I have not had to take those steps as I
do not smoke. I do not need them plus I cannot see the sense in watching
hard earned money just going up in smoke in front of my eyes.
Congratulations again & I hope you can kick the habit for ever."
"Love your newsletter...There was an episode of Absolutely Fabulous where
Patsy was trying to quit, and she had nicotine patches plastered all over
her body. Unfortunately, they all absorbed the nicotine out of her skin
and then they all fell off...Hopefully you're not at that stage yet!"
- Nick, Canberra
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or office and enter a virtual web-based "environment". Choose images and
sounds from the collection including a summer's day, waterfall, crackling
fire, streets of New York and white noise. Use it to relax, wake up, block
out noises or mask private conversations.
In a net shell: Relax.
Keep your brain oiled with the online version of the latest newspaper game
craze. Sudoku is a deceptively simple numbers puzzle originally from
The goal? Each number must appear only once in each row, column and 3x3
block. Easy, right?
In a net shell: Challenging.
Virtual Guitar and Chord Book (http://www.chordbook.com/)
Learn new guitar chords with an interactive Flash-built guitar that lets
you strum, listen, see finger positions, apply a capo, mute strings and
quick tune. Access 1000-plus chords or make your own then save to your
personal chordbank. Learn to play scales and improve your lead solos with
the guitar scales generator.
In a net shell: Hit it.
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Delve into the mystery of the submarine that disappeared without a trace
- submitted by Peter J Richardson, Brisbane
Cold Remedies From The Cupboard
Find natural remedies at home.
- submitted by Wally
Food for thought
"Honesty is when there is harmony in what you think, say, and do." -
Gerald G Jampolsky.
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Top links from last issue
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Working Title movies (http://www.cuechamp.com/working_title.htm)
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